Tuesday, November 24, 2009

The bountiful love




LOVE is something which....happens....it can't be expressed but can only be felt. But when the same LOVE is expressed in money, the bliss changes into a hell....Read this story....story of a loving couple and their life in hot water...how about an ice cafechino???...and that too for all free ;)

'Sarah..Sarah..
Tujpe ye dil haraa..
Tere adaaye ne mujko maara..

Tu hain mere ankhon ka taara..
Tere bin main hu besahaara..
Ek taraf tu aur dusri taraf ye duniya saara..'

The most irrititating poem sung by Rohit, as he sings the same
one everyday.But still i kind of feel it sweet :)
From past two years,Rohit tried to give all the luxuries by pulling out all the stops.I know that he loves me very much but he never tried to understand me, never understood that what all i want from him is his love and his saath...


But Rohit always thought that i was unadjustable with him as i come from a rich family. In short,we both are uncompatible but we love each other...
..

I still remember the day when he bought a chaffinch on our first anniversary.



I always tell him that i love singing birds. So,he bought one. It kind of looked like an expensive one but as i always say, he is in the habit of putting himself in a tight squeeze. But to give him his due, he's a very loving and caring husband :)

After that things were getting quite bad. Rohit lost his job as he didn't show up much in his office.
Rohit is kind of crafty man. He always skips his work and passes the buck. But the desire to make money made him to take a wrong turn....

We were in a financial debt, as he took a fat loan to buy a bungalow and gift it to
me for my birthday.

He never told me that he took a loan. When i asked him about the bungalow, he told me that it was a gift from his company. But i was not sure about it so he started leading me a dance.

Rohit knows his onions that by doing all this he could be in a fine pickle. But to make me happy he kept himself to himself. To keep up with the joneses, he started becoming a gadget freak. If i would have known all this from the scratch, i would have tried to tell him that i never longed for luxuries or gadgets or any material life. All i wanted from him was only his love and saath....





My silence has ruined our life. The bountiful love he showed me brought us in a fix......

9 comments:

Aparna said...

nice post

Aparna said...

nice use of idioms....


the story is very sweet

keep it up :)

akhila said...

@aparna thank u so much.....
inspired all from u:)

Anonymous said...

hey akku.....really very nice story...nice use of idioms....i really feel sorry for sarah and rohit....as i like happy endings....sweet story by sweet gal...and the very apt title :)

vineet said...

good good!u r jus 15 n comin up with sumthn like this is truly commendabl...nice wrk n hope this blog j'ney of urs goes in a swift passion..

√♪נ汉Ψ said...

Nice job...
the story is really Nice.
keep writing...like this...
:) :P

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Akhila said...

@vineet..thanks for your comment...it actually gives one encouragement

ρ¢ «╬♥♥╬« said...

hey,,really nice story!!